Fix found typos

Fix found typos in the documentation -Jesus
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Jesus Fuentes 2018-02-28 07:30:18 -06:00
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Internet of Things (XEP-0323, -0324, -0325, -0347)
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The Internet of Things (IoT) XEPs are an experimental open standard how XMPP can be used for IoT. They currently consists of
The Internet of Things (IoT) XEPs are an experimental open standard on how XMPP can be used for IoT. They currently consist of
- XEP-0323 Sensor Data
- XEP-0324 Provisioning
- XEP-0325 Control
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Thing Builder
-------------
The `org.jivesoftware.smackx.iot.Thing` class acts as basic entity representing a single "Thing" which can used to retrieve data from or to send control commands to. `Things` are constructed using a builder API.
The `org.jivesoftware.smackx.iot.Thing` class acts as basic entity representing a single "Thing" which can be used to retrieve data from or to send control commands to. `Things` are constructed using a builder API.
Reading data from things
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}).build();
```
While not strictly required, most things are identified via a key and serial number. We also build the thing with a "momentary read out request handler" which when triggered, retrieved the current temperature and reports it back to the requestor.
While not strictly required, most things are identified via a key and serial number. We also build the thing with a "momentary read out request handler" which when triggered, retrieves the current temperature and reports it back to the requestor.
After the `Thing` is build, it needs to be made available so that other entities within the federated XMPP network can use it. Right now, we only intall the Thing in the `IoTDataManager`, which means the thing will act on read out requests but not be managed by a provisioning server.
After the `Thing` is built, it needs to be made available so that other entities within the federated XMPP network can use it. Right now we only install the Thing in the `IoTDataManager`, which means the thing will act on read out requests but not be managed by a provisioning server.
```java
IoTDataManager iotDataManager = IoTDataManager.getInstanceFor(connection);
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Controlling a thing
-------------------
Things can also be controlled, e.g. to turn on a light. Let's create thing which can be used to turn the light on and off.
Things can also be controlled, e.g. to turn on a light. Let's create a thing which can be used to turn the light on and off.
```java
Thing controlThing = Thing.builder().setKey(key).setSerialNumber(sn).setControlRequestHandler(new ThingControlRequest() {
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}).build();
```
No we have to install this thing into the `IoTControlManager`:
Now we have to install this thing into the `IoTControlManager`:
```java
IoTControlManager iotControlManager = IoTControlManager.getInstanceFor(connection);
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Discovery
---------
You may wondered how a full JIDs of things can be determined. One approach is using the discovery mechanisms specified in XEP-0347. Smack provides the `IoTDiscoveryManager` as API for this.
You may have wondered how a full JIDs of things can be determined. One approach is using the discovery mechanisms specified in XEP-0347. Smack provides the `IoTDiscoveryManager` as an API for this.
For example, instead of just installing the previous things in the `IoTDataManager` and/or `IoTControlManager`, we could also use the `IoTDiscoveryManger` to register the thing with a registry. Doing thing also installs the thing in the `IoTDataManager` and the `IoTControlManager`.
For example, instead of just installing the previous things in the `IoTDataManager` and/or `IoTControlManager`, we could also use the `IoTDiscoveryManger` to register the thing with a registry. Doing this also installs the thing in the `IoTDataManager` and the `IoTControlManager`.
```java
IoTDiscoveryManager iotDiscoveryManager = IoTDiscoveryManager.getInstanceFor(connection);
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Provisioning
------------
Things can usually only be used by other things if they are friends. Since a thing normally can't decide on its own if an incoming friendship request should be granted or not, we can delegate this decission to a provisioning service. Smack provides the `IoTProvisinoManager` to deal with friendship and provisioning.
Things can usually only be used by other things if they are friends. Since a thing normally can't decide on its own if an incoming friendship request should be granted or not, we can delegate this decision to a provisioning service. Smack provides the `IoTProvisinoManager` to deal with friendship and provisioning.
For example, if you want to befriend another thing: