From 463030f9450111caca692ba9561d3207060713c5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Tammi L. Coles" Date: Sat, 2 Dec 2023 17:54:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] edits to commit f6bec55df5 --- book/source/04-certificates.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/book/source/04-certificates.md b/book/source/04-certificates.md index c73f079..24b4a09 100644 --- a/book/source/04-certificates.md +++ b/book/source/04-certificates.md @@ -251,13 +251,13 @@ Additionally, OpenPGP allows modeling User ID-specific preferences. The idea is ## A typical OpenPGP certificate, revisited -Now that we've discussed how keys and identity components are linked together, we can have another look at the certificate from {numref}`fig-openpgp-certificate-components`. This time we include all of its binding signatures, as well as a direct key signature that contains metadata for the full certificate: +Following our review of how keys and identity components are linked, let's reexamine the OpenPGP certificate from {numref}`fig-openpgp-certificate-components`. Our focus not extends to all of its binding signatures and the direct key signature that contains metadata for the full certificate: ```{figure} diag/OpenPGP_Certificate.png :name: fig-openpgp-certificate -:alt: Depicts an OpenPGP certificate, including a set of components, binding signatures and a direct key signature on the primary key. +:alt: Depicts an OpenPGP certificate, including a set of components, binding signatures, and a direct key signature on the primary key. -A typical OpenPGP certificate, including binding signatures for all of its components, and a signature that associates metadata with the primary key +This shows a typical OpenPGP certificate, including binding signatures for all of its components, and a signature that associates metadata with the primary key. ``` ## Revocations