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@@ -135,13 +135,11 @@ For specific guidelines on which subpackets should be marked as critical, refer
 
 ### Notation signature subpackets
 
-[Notations](https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-12.html#notation-data) are a signature subpacket type that can be used to effectively extend the otherwise limited set of signature subpacket types with user-defined notations. An issuer can use notations to add name-value data to an OpenPGP signature.
+[Notation signature subpackets](https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-12.html#notation-data) can be used to effectively extend the otherwise limited set of signature subpacket types in OpenPGP with user-defined notations. Issuers can use these notations to add name-value pairs to an OpenPGP signature.
 
-Notation names are UTF-8 encoded strings. They may reside in the "user namespace," which means a notation *tag* (in UTF-8 string format) followed by a DNS domain name.
+Notation names – strings encoded in UTF-8 – may reside in the "user namespace." This namespace is characterized by a notation *tag*, followed by a DNS domain name, both in UTF-8 format. 
 
-#### Use of notations by Keyoxide
-
-Notations have, for example, been used for the popular decentralized identity verification service [Keyoxide](https://keyoxide.org/). Keyoxide uses notations in the `ariadne.id` namespace. See the [Keyoxide documentation](https://docs.keyoxide.org/wiki/ariadne-identity/) for more details.
+Notations, as described earlier, allow for user-defined extensions to the OpenPGP signature subpacket types. A practical and popular application of this functionality is seen in Keyoxide, a decentralized identity verification service. Keyoxide uses notations in the `ariadne.id` namespace. For the details of this implementation, refer to the [Keyoxide documentation](https://docs.keyoxide.org/wiki/ariadne-identity/).
 
 ### "Negotiating" signature hash algorithm based on recipients preference subpackets