Heiko Schaefer
4b9c064a8b
it seems confusing to imply that bob will necessarily distribute a third-party certification, this is only true some of the time
2023-11-25 15:43:24 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a3b5e263e3
add missing space
2023-11-25 15:36:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5f694e8c23
clarification: "append" implies "stored at the end of a file." this is not generally true for these two cases.
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I now realize that this is weird: we're claiming that certificates are "append only". However, the meaning of that term, in OpenPGP is ... not about the location of additions. Rather it just means "we only get to add packets, not remove them". Regardless of packet order.
2023-11-25 15:11:17 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5faec16cb8
Improve on original text: "Elements" encompass both "components" and "signatures." Regarding malicious addition, we care about both.
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Additionally, "typically" reads confusingly weak to me, erring on the side of "maybe too strong" with "will" seems better.
2023-11-25 14:56:17 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
97e413a3dd
in our text, this fingerprint represents Alice's certificate (and isn't an example)
2023-11-25 14:53:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
cdbf15e49a
clarify how the back signature is embedded
2023-11-25 14:47:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e05f104974
clarify enumeration of legitimate unbound packets
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This is supposed to be a list of legitimate uses. I've removed the elaboration of the flooding problem, and replaced it with a link to an elaboration in ch4.
2023-11-25 14:16:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2580ae317d
typo fix
2023-11-25 13:06:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1a4ef8a975
clarify: the flag is not always set
2023-11-25 13:04:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e66d5158a8
fix apostrophe format
2023-11-25 11:24:00 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
b834628558
restore language to table, clean up structure
2023-11-25 11:19:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
09efc3db67
correct CertificationRevocation section
2023-11-25 11:09:32 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
78b2766049
correct CertificationRevocation section
2023-11-25 11:09:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8fe5dfcf33
restore language of table but fix layout
2023-11-25 11:04:59 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8e81ed6b36
expand note for clarity
2023-11-25 10:57:40 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
14a95e1907
push final edits of Ch8, clarify use of italics
2023-11-25 10:56:24 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8d4c1748c7
edit ch8 advanced section up to line 358
2023-11-23 17:39:31 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
94abcc34f7
edit ch8 3rd party signatures
2023-11-23 16:44:21 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
a8b17f8fe4
edit ch8 soft and hard revocations
2023-11-23 14:34:23 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f795da774d
edit ch8 Revocation self-signatures
2023-11-23 14:24:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
92948c6dda
edit ch8 self-sig binding to primary ID
2023-11-23 14:14:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
b4954d7a14
edit ch8 dirct key signature
2023-11-23 14:11:39 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
92d7d218fb
edit ch8 adding metadata
2023-11-23 14:09:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
28a69fe381
edit ch8 binding identities
2023-11-23 14:02:13 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7d1d69d372
edit ch8 binding signing subkeys
2023-11-23 13:34:17 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
d3c1634ae0
edit ch8 self-sigs in cert formation and mgmt
2023-11-23 13:12:30 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
560f75d703
edit ch8 section on distinct functions of self- v third-party sigs
2023-11-23 10:35:13 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
2340333f40
edit signatures on components intro, self-sig v 3rd party
2023-11-23 10:16:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1331e9bb5a
mention "strong set" concept
2023-11-22 17:00:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
fe8f92e99d
ch8: add link anchor
2023-11-22 16:26:25 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1e3672fa26
Add anchor, and clarify intended meaning of section
2023-11-22 15:06:02 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
25bd959aaf
Merge pull request 'tammi-ch6' ( #116 ) from tammi-ch6 into draft
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/116
2023-11-16 21:16:25 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
5259fb0606
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch6
2023-11-16 21:09:26 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
e6c935eec9
remove 'and providing varying levels of security'
2023-11-16 22:08:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4277942114
ch8: typo fix
2023-11-16 17:31:16 +01:00
heiko
8db1df2a91
Merge pull request 'ch7: edits by tammi plus text by heiko' ( #117 ) from tammi-heiko-ch7 into draft
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/117
2023-11-16 16:26:02 +00:00
heiko
a02c7562f0
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-heiko-ch7
2023-11-16 16:25:43 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
1b1e918a01
add detail to ch7 pitfalls section of cleartext signatures
2023-11-16 15:16:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
32b5e0cfe0
Align wording with https://gitlab.com/openpgp-wg/rfc4880bis/-/merge_requests/354/diffs
2023-11-16 13:31:10 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
58340c97a1
edit ch7 cleartext transformations subsection
2023-11-16 11:57:46 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
2f44224974
edit ch7 section on use case
2023-11-16 11:14:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7ed65cc02c
make second-pass edits to ch7
2023-11-16 09:48:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0def7f33ae
add link anchor
2023-11-15 12:31:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c410108a67
ch8: add link anchor
2023-11-14 22:06:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d47d9fdd53
clarify
2023-11-14 19:50:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5a454e85e7
extend todo-note
2023-11-14 19:50:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
77d056702a
clarity, fix typo, normalize capitalization
2023-11-14 19:28:48 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1e231b0f45
adjust RFC linking, minor tweaks.
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I removed the "type IDs" here, because these are *packet type* IDs. The only IDs we're using in the text are *signature types*. I believe signature type IDs are the only IDs that application developers sometimes think about in numerical terms.
2023-11-14 19:28:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ad7b58ce71
clarify/tighten: there is just *one* signature packet in this paragraph.
2023-11-14 13:35:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
029e517b84
removed "particularly", because for inline signatures, this issue doesn't exist at all. added the "cleartext" case, which is equivalent here.
2023-11-14 13:20:14 +01:00
