508 commits

Author	SHA1	Message	Date
Heiko Schaefer	77a0a69d78	clarify language	2023-11-25 17:43:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	993da3ccf4	don't use the generic word "critical" in a context where it has a technical meaning	2023-11-25 17:39:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	887c5bf0e6	remove dangling footnote syntax	2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	127f36162c	move example texts into diagram notes	2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5887bcc880	edit "trust signature" text ... - lean on the word "trust" as little as possible - some clarifications	2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	e49d1e69af	clarify certification text ... And use Bob's real fingerprint.	2023-11-25 15:57:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	4b9c064a8b	it seems confusing to imply that bob will necessarily distribute a third-party certification, this is only true some of the time	2023-11-25 15:43:24 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	a3b5e263e3	add missing space	2023-11-25 15:36:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5f694e8c23	clarification: "append" implies "stored at the end of a file." this is not generally true for these two cases. ... I now realize that this is weird: we're claiming that certificates are "append only". However, the meaning of that term, in OpenPGP is ... not about the location of additions. Rather it just means "we only get to add packets, not remove them". Regardless of packet order.	2023-11-25 15:11:17 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5faec16cb8	Improve on original text: "Elements" encompass both "components" and "signatures." Regarding malicious addition, we care about both. ... Additionally, "typically" reads confusingly weak to me, erring on the side of "maybe too strong" with "will" seems better.	2023-11-25 14:56:17 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	97e413a3dd	in our text, this fingerprint represents Alice's certificate (and isn't an example)	2023-11-25 14:53:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	cdbf15e49a	clarify how the back signature is embedded	2023-11-25 14:47:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	e05f104974	clarify enumeration of legitimate unbound packets ... This is supposed to be a list of legitimate uses. I've removed the elaboration of the flooding problem, and replaced it with a link to an elaboration in ch4.	2023-11-25 14:16:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	2580ae317d	typo fix	2023-11-25 13:06:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1a4ef8a975	clarify: the flag is not always set	2023-11-25 13:04:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	e66d5158a8	fix apostrophe format	2023-11-25 11:24:00 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	b834628558	restore language to table, clean up structure	2023-11-25 11:19:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	09efc3db67	correct CertificationRevocation section	2023-11-25 11:09:32 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	78b2766049	correct CertificationRevocation section	2023-11-25 11:09:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8fe5dfcf33	restore language of table but fix layout	2023-11-25 11:04:59 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8e81ed6b36	expand note for clarity	2023-11-25 10:57:40 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	14a95e1907	push final edits of Ch8, clarify use of italics	2023-11-25 10:56:24 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8d4c1748c7	edit ch8 advanced section up to line 358	2023-11-23 17:39:31 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	94abcc34f7	edit ch8 3rd party signatures	2023-11-23 16:44:21 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	a8b17f8fe4	edit ch8 soft and hard revocations	2023-11-23 14:34:23 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	f795da774d	edit ch8 Revocation self-signatures	2023-11-23 14:24:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	92948c6dda	edit ch8 self-sig binding to primary ID	2023-11-23 14:14:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	b4954d7a14	edit ch8 dirct key signature	2023-11-23 14:11:39 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	92d7d218fb	edit ch8 adding metadata	2023-11-23 14:09:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	28a69fe381	edit ch8 binding identities	2023-11-23 14:02:13 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	7d1d69d372	edit ch8 binding signing subkeys	2023-11-23 13:34:17 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	d3c1634ae0	edit ch8 self-sigs in cert formation and mgmt	2023-11-23 13:12:30 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	560f75d703	edit ch8 section on distinct functions of self- v third-party sigs	2023-11-23 10:35:13 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	2340333f40	edit signatures on components intro, self-sig v 3rd party	2023-11-23 10:16:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1331e9bb5a	mention "strong set" concept	2023-11-22 17:00:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	fe8f92e99d	ch8: add link anchor	2023-11-22 16:26:25 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1e3672fa26	Add anchor, and clarify intended meaning of section	2023-11-22 15:06:02 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	5259fb0606	Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch6	2023-11-16 21:09:26 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles	e6c935eec9	remove 'and providing varying levels of security'	2023-11-16 22:08:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	4277942114	ch8: typo fix	2023-11-16 17:31:16 +01:00
heiko	a02c7562f0	Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-heiko-ch7	2023-11-16 16:25:43 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles	1b1e918a01	add detail to ch7 pitfalls section of cleartext signatures	2023-11-16 15:16:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	32b5e0cfe0	Align wording with https://gitlab.com/openpgp-wg/rfc4880bis/-/merge_requests/354/diffs	2023-11-16 13:31:10 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	58340c97a1	edit ch7 cleartext transformations subsection	2023-11-16 11:57:46 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	2f44224974	edit ch7 section on use case	2023-11-16 11:14:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	7ed65cc02c	make second-pass edits to ch7	2023-11-16 09:48:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	0def7f33ae	add link anchor	2023-11-15 12:31:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	c410108a67	ch8: add link anchor	2023-11-14 22:06:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	d47d9fdd53	clarify	2023-11-14 19:50:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5a454e85e7	extend todo-note	2023-11-14 19:50:29 +01:00