518 commits

Author	SHA1	Message	Date
heiko	a02c7562f0	Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-heiko-ch7	2023-11-16 16:25:43 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles	1b1e918a01	add detail to ch7 pitfalls section of cleartext signatures	2023-11-16 15:16:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	32b5e0cfe0	Align wording with https://gitlab.com/openpgp-wg/rfc4880bis/-/merge_requests/354/diffs	2023-11-16 13:31:10 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	58340c97a1	edit ch7 cleartext transformations subsection	2023-11-16 11:57:46 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	2f44224974	edit ch7 section on use case	2023-11-16 11:14:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	7ed65cc02c	make second-pass edits to ch7	2023-11-16 09:48:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	0def7f33ae	add link anchor	2023-11-15 12:31:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	c410108a67	ch8: add link anchor	2023-11-14 22:06:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	d47d9fdd53	clarify	2023-11-14 19:50:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5a454e85e7	extend todo-note	2023-11-14 19:50:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	77d056702a	clarity, fix typo, normalize capitalization	2023-11-14 19:28:48 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1e231b0f45	adjust RFC linking, minor tweaks. ... I removed the "type IDs" here, because these are *packet type* IDs. The only IDs we're using in the text are *signature types*. I believe signature type IDs are the only IDs that application developers sometimes think about in numerical terms.	2023-11-14 19:28:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	ad7b58ce71	clarify/tighten: there is just *one* signature packet in this paragraph.	2023-11-14 13:35:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	029e517b84	removed "particularly", because for inline signatures, this issue doesn't exist at all. added the "cleartext" case, which is equivalent here.	2023-11-14 13:20:14 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	94eb58070b	Attempt at clearer description	2023-11-14 11:33:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	6db0a1f841	Merge branch 'tammi-ch7' into heiko-ch7 ... # Conflicts: # book/source/07-signing_data.md	2023-11-13 23:56:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	78c8327733	edit ch7 cleartext signature	2023-11-13 22:36:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	e6b9c11a3d	edit ch7 inline signatures	2023-11-13 22:06:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	17d43e0e91	edit ch7 inline signatures	2023-11-13 21:33:03 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	62af0cb83b	edit ch7 detached signatures	2023-11-13 21:27:37 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	ee65b80bc7	default to data signatures not signature over data	2023-11-13 21:20:09 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	7e89a9f11f	remove blank line	2023-11-13 21:18:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	a76acf950b	edits to data signature forms	2023-11-13 20:57:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	f0052e23c2	edits to data signature forms	2023-11-13 20:57:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	42eb52e95c	ch8: some more text about delegating trust and WoT	2023-11-13 20:52:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	6812b29d23	ch8: third-party signatures	2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	61d664f0b0	ch8: edit and expand "revocations" section	2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	2346c346c2	ch8: edits for clarity and flow	2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	06da358f99	ch8: write missing "signatures for primary key metadata" section	2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	6bbef95d21	ch4: add todo	2023-11-13 01:29:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	7706df1cc9	ch4: fix typos	2023-11-13 01:28:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1c3a693442	minor editing fix	2023-11-12 00:44:54 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1c8d728612	revert accidental removal of Fingerprint diagram	2023-11-12 00:18:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	6dc243de98	ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF	2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1b5edc1774	ch7: clarify CSF and its use	2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	4fd97868e8	edit ch7 forms of data signatures	2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	f7ea1b115e	edit ch7 ## Signature types	2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	51ba919106	edit ch7 signatures over data	2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8a82cebd6c	edit ch6 notation subpackets with the Keyoxide example	2023-11-10 16:48:25 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	44a4a00a2e	edit ch6 "Criticality of subpackets"	2023-11-10 16:30:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	93d061efc7	remove another random colon :D	2023-11-10 15:57:47 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	48f39f0ffb	remove colon from subheader	2023-11-10 15:57:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	ec61e782df	edit ch6 hashed vs unhashed areas	2023-11-10 15:56:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	18a621c827	edit on ch6 verifying packet section and subpackets	2023-11-10 15:41:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	3dcc962c57	edit on ch6 verifying packet section	2023-11-10 15:21:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	3b401a17a7	tighten up ch6 signature packet creation section	2023-11-10 15:07:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	d4a616094e	restructure signature packet section of ch6	2023-11-10 14:45:39 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	2445b2f414	ch7: edits for clarity	2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	7f9aba28fa	restructure text blocks	2023-11-09 01:43:56 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	420e15e8c8	remove seemingly stray text	2023-11-08 21:01:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1335d5568f	edits	2023-11-08 21:01:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	b73789d1c8	adjust structure	2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	0039afd7fd	edits	2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	e20a629db7	edit signature types section in Ch6	2023-11-07 21:33:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	2ee0d7263a	edits on Ch6 terminology	2023-11-07 21:16:08 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	e23fd3de9c	tighten text of signatures intro section	2023-11-07 20:58:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	bf41637c05	Restructure opening	2023-11-07 14:34:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	390089139e	remove todo text	2023-11-06 23:25:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	169ce620e9	Experiment: Adjust signature type diagram structure	2023-11-06 23:21:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	658b03b1a4	Edits (in part based on feedback from David)	2023-11-06 13:45:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	d1e23fef9e	Add new signature diagrams. Add some more text and structure for them.	2023-11-06 00:55:46 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1dc7a7f116	update image	2023-11-05 21:46:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	366bb70b54	import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft	2023-11-05 21:26:35 +01:00
skvisual	7326a765ad	import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft	2023-11-05 21:20:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	256c9b14e8	ch19: add link target	2023-11-05 20:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	10246eebc1	Drop duplicate diagram files	2023-11-04 19:09:19 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	c05cd64f7f	Drop many of the legacy diagrams	2023-11-04 19:06:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	e1668dbd09	Add a bit of text about where the "backsig" is actually embedded	2023-11-04 18:39:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	f91b386ea9	Edits based on David's input	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	4754753cfc	Elaborate how the signature is calculated	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	384f26c1bc	David says the signature type diagram is confusing, maybe it needs more explanation? ... I suppose the (at least) 2x2 Matrix of types of component signatures is hard to make sense of, and hard to visualize.	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	4d8ade3502	Add diagram for signature packet structure	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	e814cc5bb1	tmp: placeholder images, waiting for replacements in skvis-draft	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1ec7d9a2ea	David points out that "magic" can be read as intimidating. ... Like a topic is very hard to understand, or only accessible to wizards.	2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	bac6fbe6fd	clause correction in 69f5bce965	2023-11-03 12:31:21 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5e97344039	fix link target name	2023-11-03 12:26:06 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	d33c8d7933	ch3: sharpen our terminology, use "hash digest" by default ... Fixes #98	2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	40924bef0d	Slightly expand/clarify phrasing on quantum resistance	2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8bb4baeff7	change verb in ef7a9956e4	2023-11-03 12:20:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	661beb75e4	correct spelling in be01588cce	2023-11-03 12:18:34 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	94ef48bdee	edit 3ca2bc5529	2023-11-03 12:16:27 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	f6bcc53211	Fix tense	2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	75ac101a40	Introduce terms: confidentiality and authenticity	2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	53473b025c	Remove redundancy	2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	22b05ed942	Motivation text for this document	2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	a3cf766492	Reorder text	2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	139a543db2	resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/104#issuecomment-1318049	2023-11-03 11:59:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	080c88909b	Cut redundancy	2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	e4631e2b23	"Zooming in" content was moved to chapters at the end of the book	2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5eb6d310cf	Fix version claims and add a bit more detail about extensions to 4880. ... It's not so straightforward: RFC 2440 and 4880 both define OpenPGP version 4 artifacts. So naming versions in the text is tricky.	2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	1c9b9d8724	Remove stray brace	2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	31d64fdb37	Fix link syntax	2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	5f41b4fe64	update link to component_signatures_chapter	2023-11-03 10:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer	8704758dde	Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch4 ... # Conflicts: # book/source/04-certificates.md	2023-11-03 10:43:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	8fc4302338	resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1317436	2023-11-03 10:35:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	783b151af6	Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291286	2023-11-03 10:20:20 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	acb1d9f7e1	Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291281	2023-11-03 10:16:00 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	86ce3d8ce2	change to bind to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291278	2023-11-03 10:15:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	969fde83b2	change often to typically to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291271	2023-11-03 10:14:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles	0febf20d24	correct that fingerprint is not unique to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291270	2023-11-03 10:10:36 +01:00