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Heiko Schaefer
4277942114
ch8: typo fix 2023-11-16 17:31:16 +01:00
heiko
8db1df2a91 Merge pull request 'ch7: edits by tammi plus text by heiko' (#117) from tammi-heiko-ch7 into draft
Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/117
2023-11-16 16:26:02 +00:00
heiko
a02c7562f0 Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-heiko-ch7 2023-11-16 16:25:43 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
1b1e918a01 add detail to ch7 pitfalls section of cleartext signatures 2023-11-16 15:16:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
32b5e0cfe0
Align wording with https://gitlab.com/openpgp-wg/rfc4880bis/-/merge_requests/354/diffs 2023-11-16 13:31:10 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
58340c97a1 edit ch7 cleartext transformations subsection 2023-11-16 11:57:46 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
2f44224974 edit ch7 section on use case 2023-11-16 11:14:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7ed65cc02c make second-pass edits to ch7 2023-11-16 09:48:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0def7f33ae
add link anchor 2023-11-15 12:31:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c410108a67
ch8: add link anchor 2023-11-14 22:06:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d47d9fdd53
clarify 2023-11-14 19:50:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5a454e85e7
extend todo-note 2023-11-14 19:50:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
77d056702a
clarity, fix typo, normalize capitalization 2023-11-14 19:28:48 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1e231b0f45
adjust RFC linking, minor tweaks.
I removed the "type IDs" here, because these are *packet type* IDs. The only IDs we're using in the text are *signature types*. I believe signature type IDs are the only IDs that application developers sometimes think about in numerical terms.
2023-11-14 19:28:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ad7b58ce71
clarify/tighten: there is just *one* signature packet in this paragraph. 2023-11-14 13:35:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
029e517b84
removed "particularly", because for inline signatures, this issue doesn't exist at all. added the "cleartext" case, which is equivalent here. 2023-11-14 13:20:14 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
94eb58070b
Attempt at clearer description 2023-11-14 11:33:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6db0a1f841
Merge branch 'tammi-ch7' into heiko-ch7
# Conflicts:
#	book/source/07-signing_data.md
2023-11-13 23:56:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
78c8327733 edit ch7 cleartext signature 2023-11-13 22:36:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e6b9c11a3d edit ch7 inline signatures 2023-11-13 22:06:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
17d43e0e91 edit ch7 inline signatures 2023-11-13 21:33:03 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
62af0cb83b edit ch7 detached signatures 2023-11-13 21:27:37 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ee65b80bc7 default to data signatures not signature over data 2023-11-13 21:20:09 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7e89a9f11f remove blank line 2023-11-13 21:18:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
a76acf950b edits to data signature forms 2023-11-13 20:57:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f0052e23c2 edits to data signature forms 2023-11-13 20:57:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
42eb52e95c
ch8: some more text about delegating trust and WoT 2023-11-13 20:52:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6812b29d23
ch8: third-party signatures 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
61d664f0b0
ch8: edit and expand "revocations" section 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2346c346c2
ch8: edits for clarity and flow 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
06da358f99
ch8: write missing "signatures for primary key metadata" section 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6bbef95d21
ch4: add todo 2023-11-13 01:29:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7706df1cc9
ch4: fix typos 2023-11-13 01:28:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c3a693442
minor editing fix 2023-11-12 00:44:54 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c8d728612
revert accidental removal of Fingerprint diagram 2023-11-12 00:18:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6dc243de98
ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1b5edc1774
ch7: clarify CSF and its use 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4fd97868e8 edit ch7 forms of data signatures 2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f7ea1b115e edit ch7 ## Signature types 2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
51ba919106 edit ch7 signatures over data 2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8a82cebd6c edit ch6 notation subpackets with the Keyoxide example 2023-11-10 16:48:25 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
44a4a00a2e edit ch6 "Criticality of subpackets" 2023-11-10 16:30:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
93d061efc7 remove another random colon :D 2023-11-10 15:57:47 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
48f39f0ffb remove colon from subheader 2023-11-10 15:57:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ec61e782df edit ch6 hashed vs unhashed areas 2023-11-10 15:56:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
18a621c827 edit on ch6 verifying packet section and subpackets 2023-11-10 15:41:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3dcc962c57 edit on ch6 verifying packet section 2023-11-10 15:21:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3b401a17a7 tighten up ch6 signature packet creation section 2023-11-10 15:07:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
d4a616094e restructure signature packet section of ch6 2023-11-10 14:45:39 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2445b2f414
ch7: edits for clarity 2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00