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Author SHA1 Message Date
Heiko Schaefer
443023b8e9
ch4: fix phrasing 2023-10-14 22:45:03 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
83ccdda6b4
Terminology fixes 2023-10-12 16:07:28 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
f0959a2b0f
Adjust
to updated RFC terminology

Fixes #52
2023-10-12 16:03:08 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
7617d7eea6
ch4: write "user id" zooming in section 2023-10-12 14:11:21 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
3688054f4f
ch4: restructure packet splitting text sections 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
1aa4696f3e
ch4: add todo notes 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
d1203075d1
ch4: move text into a "note" block
And add a remark that a visualization would help.
2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
69f7eb60e5
ch4: clarify linking 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
bab5e427e9
ch4: add a section to talk about "no more user facing hex fingerprints in v6" 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
2a3605f731
ch4: move diagram up 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
af355ae81e
ch4: adjust markup/styling of critical flags 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
c1acc328d0
ch4: move "criticality" footnote into a more visible note block 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
a1fe545e88
ch4: add a note that the example key isn't password protected
Add link to ch5 for discussion of encrypted private key material.
2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
134407ee2f
ch4: add a TODO note 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
66087b3ec9
ch4: clarify terms, use "identity components" 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
1f89d39740
ch4: link to glossary for "CA" 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
74710d804a
ch4: clarify the primary key can't confer validity beyond its own 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
fd2469e0e4
ch4: make links for "more on this below" pointers 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
8bf3440373
ch4: zooming in, write subkey sections 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
74e3810e84
ch4: zooming in, edits 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
96d9eff25f
ch4: zooming in, fix indentation of sq dump output 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
b1acb31ed0
ch4: zooming in, add subkey dumps 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
5fdb9be451
ch4: minor edits to "Seen as an OpenPGP certificate" 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
ac070e5229
ch4 "zooming in": fix capitalizations/styling
- Don't use quotation marks for RFC terms. Use italics, when appropriate.
- The word "packet" isn't capitalized when referring to a specific packet.
2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
c592c6c02d
ch4: don't use title case 2023-10-12 14:11:02 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
44eba4a6bb
change to 'may refer to' 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
6f179d2c07
remove asysmmetric explainer, evaluate for ch3 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
b353129bcc
add digital signatures 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
2beba67d13
edit section on layers of keys, integrating previoous Ch2 section 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
4e9ddaee0b
clarify in section on public vs private keys 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
ab926334bd
edit section intro on understanding keys 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
7da0131ea7
change opening lines/introduction to chapter 2023-10-12 14:07:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
1672ecc4c2 change to 'may refer to' 2023-10-12 14:06:10 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
54a4f3457a remove asysmmetric explainer, evaluate for ch3 2023-10-12 13:54:51 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
6130da92f3 add digital signatures 2023-10-12 13:42:38 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
63c3a2c94a edit section on layers of keys, integrating previoous Ch2 section 2023-10-07 15:13:58 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
f9d0c132ee clarify in section on public vs private keys 2023-10-07 15:03:43 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
edad5d19bf edit section intro on understanding keys 2023-10-07 14:49:26 +02:00
Tammi L. Coles
b28166a251 change opening lines/introduction to chapter 2023-10-07 14:45:56 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
7e760f2035
ch4: minor edits 2023-10-05 10:33:42 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
c657d64734
ch4: improvements to "zooming in" 2023-10-05 10:33:42 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
ec78df2453
ch4: clarify terminology
Also see #43
2023-10-05 10:30:35 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
305f039dff
ch4: feedback from wiktor 2023-10-04 18:40:02 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
8ca953e39e
diag: Use png versions of diagrams for now
In the epub version, some viewers don't show text for svg diagrams (probably a missing font issue).
2023-10-04 16:25:04 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
0368edef16
ch4: flesh out first part of "zooming in" section 2023-10-04 15:37:39 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
0a41338801
ch4: simplify "note" markup 2023-10-04 15:35:46 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
ee35f4af51
ch4: remove duplication 2023-10-04 14:33:41 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
a59190bf4b
diag: new component key diagram 2023-10-03 20:39:05 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
cc6077e27c
ch4: use new diagrams 2023-10-03 19:34:48 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
1f18e9a8ff
ch4: Edit main part of the text 2023-10-03 19:34:48 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
42e37a6260
ch4: Introduce "component" term 2023-10-03 19:14:39 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
7c94b45ea8
ch4: Add new certificate diagram 2023-10-03 19:14:39 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
854bda18ad
ch4: adjust to use alice's v6 key; minor edits 2023-10-01 18:32:06 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
f080803555
ch4: add alt text to figure 2023-10-01 18:30:56 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
47867b32f4
ch4: update links from 4880 to crypto-refresh 2023-10-01 16:35:17 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
eef2a11842
Add input from Wiktor 2023-09-28 16:02:30 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
a649c1fe6d
ch4: tweak structure 2023-09-27 10:04:56 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
9d0b84e7a6
ch3/4: Include diagrams as figures with caption
Fixes #28
2023-09-25 19:39:25 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
a7e435c31d
move certificate validity from ch9 to ch4 2023-09-25 17:14:10 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
1834ef9a5e
ch4: move packet section to the end 2023-09-25 16:42:48 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
319f258aca
ch4: work on structure
Move introduction of asymmetric key pairs and diagrams to ch3.
2023-09-25 14:11:44 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
5cef8e87c6
ch4: edits for clarity 2023-09-21 20:15:13 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
cd09323991
ch4: component keys, edits
(process feedback from https://codeberg.org/openpgp/doc-int/issues/5)
2023-09-21 20:12:55 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
60025101f5
ch4: drop linebreaks, very minor edits 2023-09-21 16:09:44 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
8aa34dfa59
ch4: fold outline notes into section structure 2023-09-21 15:46:03 +02:00
Heiko Schaefer
b56b56f9b6
ch4 rename file 2023-09-20 20:49:05 +02:00
Renamed from book/source/04-certs.md (Browse further)