Tammi L. Coles
2f44224974
edit ch7 section on use case
2023-11-16 11:14:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7ed65cc02c
make second-pass edits to ch7
2023-11-16 09:48:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d47d9fdd53
clarify
2023-11-14 19:50:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5a454e85e7
extend todo-note
2023-11-14 19:50:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
77d056702a
clarity, fix typo, normalize capitalization
2023-11-14 19:28:48 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1e231b0f45
adjust RFC linking, minor tweaks.
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I removed the "type IDs" here, because these are *packet type* IDs. The only IDs we're using in the text are *signature types*. I believe signature type IDs are the only IDs that application developers sometimes think about in numerical terms.
2023-11-14 19:28:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ad7b58ce71
clarify/tighten: there is just *one* signature packet in this paragraph.
2023-11-14 13:35:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
029e517b84
removed "particularly", because for inline signatures, this issue doesn't exist at all. added the "cleartext" case, which is equivalent here.
2023-11-14 13:20:14 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
94eb58070b
Attempt at clearer description
2023-11-14 11:33:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6db0a1f841
Merge branch 'tammi-ch7' into heiko-ch7
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# Conflicts:
# book/source/07-signing_data.md
2023-11-13 23:56:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
78c8327733
edit ch7 cleartext signature
2023-11-13 22:36:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e6b9c11a3d
edit ch7 inline signatures
2023-11-13 22:06:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
17d43e0e91
edit ch7 inline signatures
2023-11-13 21:33:03 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
62af0cb83b
edit ch7 detached signatures
2023-11-13 21:27:37 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ee65b80bc7
default to data signatures not signature over data
2023-11-13 21:20:09 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7e89a9f11f
remove blank line
2023-11-13 21:18:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
a76acf950b
edits to data signature forms
2023-11-13 20:57:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f0052e23c2
edits to data signature forms
2023-11-13 20:57:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6dc243de98
ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF
2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1b5edc1774
ch7: clarify CSF and its use
2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4fd97868e8
edit ch7 forms of data signatures
2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f7ea1b115e
edit ch7 ## Signature types
2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
51ba919106
edit ch7 signatures over data
2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2445b2f414
ch7: edits for clarity
2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7f9aba28fa
restructure text blocks
2023-11-09 01:43:56 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
420e15e8c8
remove seemingly stray text
2023-11-08 21:01:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1335d5568f
edits
2023-11-08 21:01:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b73789d1c8
adjust structure
2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0039afd7fd
edits
2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
bf41637c05
Restructure opening
2023-11-07 14:34:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
390089139e
remove todo text
2023-11-06 23:25:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
169ce620e9
Experiment: Adjust signature type diagram structure
2023-11-06 23:21:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
658b03b1a4
Edits (in part based on feedback from David)
2023-11-06 13:45:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d1e23fef9e
Add new signature diagrams. Add some more text and structure for them.
2023-11-06 00:55:46 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1dc7a7f116
update image
2023-11-05 21:46:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
366bb70b54
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft
2023-11-05 21:26:35 +01:00
skvisual
7326a765ad
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft
2023-11-05 21:20:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
256c9b14e8
ch19: add link target
2023-11-05 20:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
10246eebc1
Drop duplicate diagram files
2023-11-04 19:09:19 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c05cd64f7f
Drop many of the legacy diagrams
2023-11-04 19:06:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e1668dbd09
Add a bit of text about where the "backsig" is actually embedded
2023-11-04 18:39:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f91b386ea9
Edits based on David's input
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4754753cfc
Elaborate how the signature is calculated
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
384f26c1bc
David says the signature type diagram is confusing, maybe it needs more explanation?
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I suppose the (at least) 2x2 Matrix of types of component signatures is hard to make sense of, and hard to visualize.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4d8ade3502
Add diagram for signature packet structure
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e814cc5bb1
tmp: placeholder images, waiting for replacements in skvis-draft
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1ec7d9a2ea
David points out that "magic" can be read as intimidating.
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Like a topic is very hard to understand, or only accessible to wizards.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
aa50f22d2c
Merge pull request 'Minor edits for ch3' ( #99 ) from heiko-ch3 into draft
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/99
2023-11-03 11:33:16 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
bac6fbe6fd
clause correction in 69f5bce965
2023-11-03 12:31:21 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5e97344039
fix link target name
2023-11-03 12:26:06 +01:00