Heiko Schaefer
1c3a693442
minor editing fix
2023-11-12 00:44:54 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c8d728612
revert accidental removal of Fingerprint diagram
2023-11-12 00:18:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6dc243de98
ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF
2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1b5edc1774
ch7: clarify CSF and its use
2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4fd97868e8
edit ch7 forms of data signatures
2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f7ea1b115e
edit ch7 ## Signature types
2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
51ba919106
edit ch7 signatures over data
2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8a82cebd6c
edit ch6 notation subpackets with the Keyoxide example
2023-11-10 16:48:25 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
44a4a00a2e
edit ch6 "Criticality of subpackets"
2023-11-10 16:30:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
93d061efc7
remove another random colon :D
2023-11-10 15:57:47 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
48f39f0ffb
remove colon from subheader
2023-11-10 15:57:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ec61e782df
edit ch6 hashed vs unhashed areas
2023-11-10 15:56:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
18a621c827
edit on ch6 verifying packet section and subpackets
2023-11-10 15:41:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3dcc962c57
edit on ch6 verifying packet section
2023-11-10 15:21:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3b401a17a7
tighten up ch6 signature packet creation section
2023-11-10 15:07:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
d4a616094e
restructure signature packet section of ch6
2023-11-10 14:45:39 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2445b2f414
ch7: edits for clarity
2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7f9aba28fa
restructure text blocks
2023-11-09 01:43:56 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
420e15e8c8
remove seemingly stray text
2023-11-08 21:01:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1335d5568f
edits
2023-11-08 21:01:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b73789d1c8
adjust structure
2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0039afd7fd
edits
2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e20a629db7
edit signature types section in Ch6
2023-11-07 21:33:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
2ee0d7263a
edits on Ch6 terminology
2023-11-07 21:16:08 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e23fd3de9c
tighten text of signatures intro section
2023-11-07 20:58:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
bf41637c05
Restructure opening
2023-11-07 14:34:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
390089139e
remove todo text
2023-11-06 23:25:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
169ce620e9
Experiment: Adjust signature type diagram structure
2023-11-06 23:21:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
658b03b1a4
Edits (in part based on feedback from David)
2023-11-06 13:45:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d1e23fef9e
Add new signature diagrams. Add some more text and structure for them.
2023-11-06 00:55:46 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1dc7a7f116
update image
2023-11-05 21:46:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
366bb70b54
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft
2023-11-05 21:26:35 +01:00
skvisual
7326a765ad
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft
2023-11-05 21:20:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
256c9b14e8
ch19: add link target
2023-11-05 20:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
10246eebc1
Drop duplicate diagram files
2023-11-04 19:09:19 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c05cd64f7f
Drop many of the legacy diagrams
2023-11-04 19:06:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e1668dbd09
Add a bit of text about where the "backsig" is actually embedded
2023-11-04 18:39:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f91b386ea9
Edits based on David's input
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4754753cfc
Elaborate how the signature is calculated
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
384f26c1bc
David says the signature type diagram is confusing, maybe it needs more explanation?
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I suppose the (at least) 2x2 Matrix of types of component signatures is hard to make sense of, and hard to visualize.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4d8ade3502
Add diagram for signature packet structure
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e814cc5bb1
tmp: placeholder images, waiting for replacements in skvis-draft
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1ec7d9a2ea
David points out that "magic" can be read as intimidating.
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Like a topic is very hard to understand, or only accessible to wizards.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
bac6fbe6fd
clause correction in 69f5bce965
2023-11-03 12:31:21 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5e97344039
fix link target name
2023-11-03 12:26:06 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d33c8d7933
ch3: sharpen our terminology, use "hash digest" by default
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Fixes #98
2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
40924bef0d
Slightly expand/clarify phrasing on quantum resistance
2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8bb4baeff7
change verb in ef7a9956e4
2023-11-03 12:20:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
661beb75e4
correct spelling in be01588cce
2023-11-03 12:18:34 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
94ef48bdee
edit 3ca2bc5529
2023-11-03 12:16:27 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f6bcc53211
Fix tense
2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
75ac101a40
Introduce terms: confidentiality and authenticity
2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
53473b025c
Remove redundancy
2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
22b05ed942
Motivation text for this document
2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a3cf766492
Reorder text
2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
139a543db2
resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/104#issuecomment-1318049
2023-11-03 11:59:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
080c88909b
Cut redundancy
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e4631e2b23
"Zooming in" content was moved to chapters at the end of the book
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5eb6d310cf
Fix version claims and add a bit more detail about extensions to 4880.
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It's not so straightforward: RFC 2440 and 4880 both define OpenPGP version 4 artifacts. So naming versions in the text is tricky.
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c9b9d8724
Remove stray brace
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
31d64fdb37
Fix link syntax
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5f41b4fe64
update link to component_signatures_chapter
2023-11-03 10:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
8704758dde
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch4
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# Conflicts:
# book/source/04-certificates.md
2023-11-03 10:43:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8fc4302338
resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1317436
2023-11-03 10:35:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
783b151af6
Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291286
2023-11-03 10:20:20 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
acb1d9f7e1
Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291281
2023-11-03 10:16:00 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
86ce3d8ce2
change to bind to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291278
2023-11-03 10:15:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
969fde83b2
change often to typically to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291271
2023-11-03 10:14:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
0febf20d24
correct that fingerprint is not unique to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291270
2023-11-03 10:10:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
accdb48301
clarify distinct role of primary key to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291268
2023-11-03 10:08:55 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c563f8a891
Generate updated png (with spelling fix, but for some reason this time with white background 🤷 )
2023-11-02 20:07:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
8f5d9f48a1
Add a note that diagram spelling should not be fixed.
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We'll fix diagram spellings in the course of the merge into the future 'main' branch.
2023-11-02 19:51:32 +01:00
David Runge
32a05d2c5b
Remove bat based Make file for Windows as it is unused
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Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 19:05:10 +01:00
David Runge
82f59746f2
Add codespell integration, which checks all sources
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Add a make target for running `codespell` on all sources.
Skip running codespell on the build directory (we have javascript etc.
in there).
Only emit warnings but do not fail on spelling errors in diagrams.
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 19:05:05 +01:00
David Runge
cb4ac38e05
Fix spelling in source files
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Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 18:41:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
dde0eae900
spell out the "not unique" issue to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291244
2023-11-02 17:52:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
6d9bf44ba5
change fingerprint language to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291232
2023-11-02 17:46:55 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4d695764d0
connect metadata paragraphs better to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291216
2023-11-02 17:42:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e878c637b8
edit 118 to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291275
2023-11-02 17:31:14 +01:00
David Runge
e13127e064
When link checking, always build HTML from scratch
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To be on the safe side, always build HTML pages from scratch, so that
lychee checks the actual current version of the files.
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:18 +01:00
David Runge
c9e7b03f53
Fail on warnings when building with sphinx-build
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Fixes https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/issues/90
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:18 +01:00
David Runge
5fd9676392
Add a file to keep the static dir around when cloning the repo
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Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:17 +01:00
David Runge
415fb44ace
Do not fail on footnotes directly following a heading
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Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:16 +01:00
David Runge
a88e3023a8
Move 06-terminology.md to a temporary location
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As mermaid pulls in many dependencies and is not setup in CI,
sphinx-build will fail on trying to render the file.
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:15 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
3e64c68f92
use direct link (link checks in codeberg CI are currently failing for the archive.org link)
2023-11-02 14:55:25 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2a5667062e
ch17: use public key and direct key signature packet diagrams
2023-11-02 13:54:39 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
333a8862ac
change to calculated
2023-11-02 13:47:20 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
43faca00e3
correct for hash digest, move reference
2023-11-02 13:44:28 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
00270a07e5
remove extra space
2023-11-02 13:07:45 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e20658c249
resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/91#issuecomment-1310156
2023-11-02 12:46:02 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
a6516a949c
resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/91#issuecomment-1305908
2023-11-02 12:38:25 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
d37382d43d
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch17
2023-11-02 10:42:41 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
33cab7b59a
change period to colon
2023-11-02 10:17:49 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ed7ab4760f
ch6: Use new diagram
2023-11-01 21:40:49 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5b0eb1948a
Import new diagrams
2023-11-01 21:34:51 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
77c901889b
Terminology fix
2023-10-30 00:28:43 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1dbe95cb1f
fix link names
2023-10-29 23:47:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
bedae03c42
fix todo admonition syntax
2023-10-29 23:36:35 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b257e9a366
moved "VISUAL" admonitions to #95
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we should consider if we want such diagrams after the core writing phase (if we have time).
2023-10-29 23:14:32 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d44226d288
ch5: use new diagrams
2023-10-29 23:07:51 +01:00