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Author SHA1 Message Date
Heiko Schaefer
6dc243de98
ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1b5edc1774
ch7: clarify CSF and its use 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4fd97868e8 edit ch7 forms of data signatures 2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f7ea1b115e edit ch7 ## Signature types 2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
51ba919106 edit ch7 signatures over data 2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2445b2f414
ch7: edits for clarity 2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7f9aba28fa
restructure text blocks 2023-11-09 01:43:56 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
420e15e8c8
remove seemingly stray text 2023-11-08 21:01:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1335d5568f
edits 2023-11-08 21:01:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b73789d1c8
adjust structure 2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0039afd7fd
edits 2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
bf41637c05
Restructure opening 2023-11-07 14:34:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
390089139e
remove todo text 2023-11-06 23:25:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
169ce620e9
Experiment: Adjust signature type diagram structure 2023-11-06 23:21:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
658b03b1a4
Edits (in part based on feedback from David) 2023-11-06 13:45:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d1e23fef9e
Add new signature diagrams. Add some more text and structure for them. 2023-11-06 00:55:46 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1dc7a7f116
update image 2023-11-05 21:46:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
366bb70b54
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft 2023-11-05 21:26:35 +01:00
skvisual
7326a765ad
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft 2023-11-05 21:20:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
256c9b14e8
ch19: add link target 2023-11-05 20:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
10246eebc1
Drop duplicate diagram files 2023-11-04 19:09:19 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c05cd64f7f
Drop many of the legacy diagrams 2023-11-04 19:06:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e1668dbd09
Add a bit of text about where the "backsig" is actually embedded 2023-11-04 18:39:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f91b386ea9
Edits based on David's input 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4754753cfc
Elaborate how the signature is calculated 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
384f26c1bc
David says the signature type diagram is confusing, maybe it needs more explanation?
I suppose the (at least) 2x2 Matrix of types of component signatures is hard to make sense of, and hard to visualize.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4d8ade3502
Add diagram for signature packet structure 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e814cc5bb1
tmp: placeholder images, waiting for replacements in skvis-draft 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1ec7d9a2ea
David points out that "magic" can be read as intimidating.
Like a topic is very hard to understand, or only accessible to wizards.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
aa50f22d2c Merge pull request 'Minor edits for ch3' (#99) from heiko-ch3 into draft
Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/99
2023-11-03 11:33:16 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
bac6fbe6fd clause correction in 69f5bce965 2023-11-03 12:31:21 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5e97344039
fix link target name 2023-11-03 12:26:06 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d33c8d7933
ch3: sharpen our terminology, use "hash digest" by default
Fixes #98
2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
40924bef0d
Slightly expand/clarify phrasing on quantum resistance 2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
545405c176 Merge pull request 'minor edits for ch1' (#103) from heiko-ch1 into draft
Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/103
2023-11-03 11:24:59 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
8bb4baeff7 change verb in ef7a9956e4 2023-11-03 12:20:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
661beb75e4 correct spelling in be01588cce 2023-11-03 12:18:34 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
94ef48bdee edit 3ca2bc5529 2023-11-03 12:16:27 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f6bcc53211
Fix tense 2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
75ac101a40
Introduce terms: confidentiality and authenticity 2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
53473b025c
Remove redundancy 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
22b05ed942
Motivation text for this document 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a3cf766492
Reorder text 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
cb5738658d Merge pull request 'minor edits for ch2' (#104) from heiko-ch2 into draft
Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/104
2023-11-03 11:00:34 +00:00
Tammi L. Coles
139a543db2 resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/104#issuecomment-1318049 2023-11-03 11:59:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
080c88909b
Cut redundancy 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e4631e2b23
"Zooming in" content was moved to chapters at the end of the book 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5eb6d310cf
Fix version claims and add a bit more detail about extensions to 4880.
It's not so straightforward: RFC 2440 and 4880 both define OpenPGP version 4 artifacts. So naming versions in the text is tricky.
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c9b9d8724
Remove stray brace 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
31d64fdb37
Fix link syntax 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00