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Heiko Schaefer
77d056702a
clarity, fix typo, normalize capitalization 2023-11-14 19:28:48 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1e231b0f45
adjust RFC linking, minor tweaks.
I removed the "type IDs" here, because these are *packet type* IDs. The only IDs we're using in the text are *signature types*. I believe signature type IDs are the only IDs that application developers sometimes think about in numerical terms.
2023-11-14 19:28:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ad7b58ce71
clarify/tighten: there is just *one* signature packet in this paragraph. 2023-11-14 13:35:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
029e517b84
removed "particularly", because for inline signatures, this issue doesn't exist at all. added the "cleartext" case, which is equivalent here. 2023-11-14 13:20:14 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
94eb58070b
Attempt at clearer description 2023-11-14 11:33:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6db0a1f841
Merge branch 'tammi-ch7' into heiko-ch7
# Conflicts:
#	book/source/07-signing_data.md
2023-11-13 23:56:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
78c8327733 edit ch7 cleartext signature 2023-11-13 22:36:05 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e6b9c11a3d edit ch7 inline signatures 2023-11-13 22:06:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
17d43e0e91 edit ch7 inline signatures 2023-11-13 21:33:03 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
62af0cb83b edit ch7 detached signatures 2023-11-13 21:27:37 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ee65b80bc7 default to data signatures not signature over data 2023-11-13 21:20:09 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7e89a9f11f remove blank line 2023-11-13 21:18:15 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
a76acf950b edits to data signature forms 2023-11-13 20:57:56 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f0052e23c2 edits to data signature forms 2023-11-13 20:57:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
42eb52e95c
ch8: some more text about delegating trust and WoT 2023-11-13 20:52:08 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6812b29d23
ch8: third-party signatures 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
61d664f0b0
ch8: edit and expand "revocations" section 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2346c346c2
ch8: edits for clarity and flow 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
06da358f99
ch8: write missing "signatures for primary key metadata" section 2023-11-13 01:29:44 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6bbef95d21
ch4: add todo 2023-11-13 01:29:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7706df1cc9
ch4: fix typos 2023-11-13 01:28:11 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c3a693442
minor editing fix 2023-11-12 00:44:54 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c8d728612
revert accidental removal of Fingerprint diagram 2023-11-12 00:18:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
6dc243de98
ch7: Write "transformations" section about CSF 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1b5edc1774
ch7: clarify CSF and its use 2023-11-11 21:05:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4fd97868e8 edit ch7 forms of data signatures 2023-11-10 17:53:52 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f7ea1b115e edit ch7 ## Signature types 2023-11-10 17:45:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
51ba919106 edit ch7 signatures over data 2023-11-10 17:28:26 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8a82cebd6c edit ch6 notation subpackets with the Keyoxide example 2023-11-10 16:48:25 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
44a4a00a2e edit ch6 "Criticality of subpackets" 2023-11-10 16:30:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
93d061efc7 remove another random colon :D 2023-11-10 15:57:47 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
48f39f0ffb remove colon from subheader 2023-11-10 15:57:07 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
ec61e782df edit ch6 hashed vs unhashed areas 2023-11-10 15:56:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
18a621c827 edit on ch6 verifying packet section and subpackets 2023-11-10 15:41:11 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3dcc962c57 edit on ch6 verifying packet section 2023-11-10 15:21:22 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
3b401a17a7 tighten up ch6 signature packet creation section 2023-11-10 15:07:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
d4a616094e restructure signature packet section of ch6 2023-11-10 14:45:39 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2445b2f414
ch7: edits for clarity 2023-11-10 01:59:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7f9aba28fa
restructure text blocks 2023-11-09 01:43:56 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
420e15e8c8
remove seemingly stray text 2023-11-08 21:01:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1335d5568f
edits 2023-11-08 21:01:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b73789d1c8
adjust structure 2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0039afd7fd
edits 2023-11-08 21:00:29 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e20a629db7 edit signature types section in Ch6 2023-11-07 21:33:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
2ee0d7263a edits on Ch6 terminology 2023-11-07 21:16:08 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e23fd3de9c tighten text of signatures intro section 2023-11-07 20:58:28 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
bf41637c05
Restructure opening 2023-11-07 14:34:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
390089139e
remove todo text 2023-11-06 23:25:29 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
169ce620e9
Experiment: Adjust signature type diagram structure 2023-11-06 23:21:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
658b03b1a4
Edits (in part based on feedback from David) 2023-11-06 13:45:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d1e23fef9e
Add new signature diagrams. Add some more text and structure for them. 2023-11-06 00:55:46 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1dc7a7f116
update image 2023-11-05 21:46:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
366bb70b54
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft 2023-11-05 21:26:35 +01:00
skvisual
7326a765ad
import new/updated diagrams from skvis-draft 2023-11-05 21:20:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
256c9b14e8
ch19: add link target 2023-11-05 20:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
10246eebc1
Drop duplicate diagram files 2023-11-04 19:09:19 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c05cd64f7f
Drop many of the legacy diagrams 2023-11-04 19:06:40 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e1668dbd09
Add a bit of text about where the "backsig" is actually embedded 2023-11-04 18:39:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f91b386ea9
Edits based on David's input 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4754753cfc
Elaborate how the signature is calculated 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
384f26c1bc
David says the signature type diagram is confusing, maybe it needs more explanation?
I suppose the (at least) 2x2 Matrix of types of component signatures is hard to make sense of, and hard to visualize.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4d8ade3502
Add diagram for signature packet structure 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e814cc5bb1
tmp: placeholder images, waiting for replacements in skvis-draft 2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1ec7d9a2ea
David points out that "magic" can be read as intimidating.
Like a topic is very hard to understand, or only accessible to wizards.
2023-11-03 18:51:12 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
bac6fbe6fd clause correction in 69f5bce965 2023-11-03 12:31:21 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5e97344039
fix link target name 2023-11-03 12:26:06 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d33c8d7933
ch3: sharpen our terminology, use "hash digest" by default
Fixes #98
2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
40924bef0d
Slightly expand/clarify phrasing on quantum resistance 2023-11-03 12:25:50 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8bb4baeff7 change verb in ef7a9956e4 2023-11-03 12:20:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
661beb75e4 correct spelling in be01588cce 2023-11-03 12:18:34 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
94ef48bdee edit 3ca2bc5529 2023-11-03 12:16:27 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
f6bcc53211
Fix tense 2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
75ac101a40
Introduce terms: confidentiality and authenticity 2023-11-03 12:04:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
53473b025c
Remove redundancy 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
22b05ed942
Motivation text for this document 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a3cf766492
Reorder text 2023-11-03 12:04:04 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
139a543db2 resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/104#issuecomment-1318049 2023-11-03 11:59:37 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
080c88909b
Cut redundancy 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e4631e2b23
"Zooming in" content was moved to chapters at the end of the book 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5eb6d310cf
Fix version claims and add a bit more detail about extensions to 4880.
It's not so straightforward: RFC 2440 and 4880 both define OpenPGP version 4 artifacts. So naming versions in the text is tricky.
2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
1c9b9d8724
Remove stray brace 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
31d64fdb37
Fix link syntax 2023-11-03 11:53:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5f41b4fe64
update link to component_signatures_chapter 2023-11-03 10:56:05 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
8704758dde
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch4
# Conflicts:
#	book/source/04-certificates.md
2023-11-03 10:43:58 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8fc4302338 resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1317436 2023-11-03 10:35:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
783b151af6 Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291286 2023-11-03 10:20:20 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
acb1d9f7e1 Resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291281 2023-11-03 10:16:00 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
86ce3d8ce2 change to bind to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291278 2023-11-03 10:15:16 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
969fde83b2 change often to typically to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291271 2023-11-03 10:14:19 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
0febf20d24 correct that fingerprint is not unique to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291270 2023-11-03 10:10:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
accdb48301 clarify distinct role of primary key to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291268 2023-11-03 10:08:55 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
c563f8a891
Generate updated png (with spelling fix, but for some reason this time with white background 🤷) 2023-11-02 20:07:00 +01:00
David Runge
cb4ac38e05
Fix spelling in source files
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 18:41:36 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
dde0eae900 spell out the "not unique" issue to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291244 2023-11-02 17:52:35 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
6d9bf44ba5 change fingerprint language to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291232 2023-11-02 17:46:55 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4d695764d0 connect metadata paragraphs better to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291216 2023-11-02 17:42:27 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
e878c637b8 edit 118 to resolve https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/81#issuecomment-1291275 2023-11-02 17:31:14 +01:00
David Runge
5fd9676392
Add a file to keep the static dir around when cloning the repo
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:17 +01:00
David Runge
415fb44ace
Do not fail on footnotes directly following a heading
Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:16 +01:00
David Runge
a88e3023a8
Move 06-terminology.md to a temporary location
As mermaid pulls in many dependencies and is not setup in CI,
sphinx-build will fail on trying to render the file.

Signed-off-by: David Runge <dave@sleepmap.de>
2023-11-02 16:46:15 +01:00